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Post by hannahk on Dec 22, 2004 21:56:59 GMT -5
wicked!
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 22, 2004 22:00:40 GMT -5
uh i know i know
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Post by Brooke on Dec 23, 2004 15:37:04 GMT -5
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Post by hannahk on Dec 23, 2004 18:53:03 GMT -5
wow. that was an exciting chapter. lol
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 23, 2004 19:07:14 GMT -5
CHAPTER 11
kevin was absolutly furious."Sarah why did u do this to me.Kevin said in a sad voice."i mean dont u love me uh never mind dont answere that cause i already know the answere which is...sarah interrupted kevin."is yes its just that i got carried away cause im a big fan of his and i just wanted to meet him".sarah said angry."more like kiss him instead and i dont call kissing meeting eachother i call it cheating on your boyfriend".kevin said even more furiously than earlier i the conversation."look im sorry its just that~~~~i messed up ok so can we just forget about it".sarah said in an annoyed voice."No we cant sarah".kevin said agrivated."ok i mean this isnt something u forget about.i mean if u shook hands or hugged i mean that is something u can forget about but not this".kevin added.Kelly took kevins hand to turn him around and leave the bathroom so she could get back to jeremy and so kevin could calm down a little.they went out the bathroom door and left sarah in the bathroom alone.they saw jeremy and he was very curious of what had happened and why kelly was holding kevins hand."why r u holding hands".jeremy asked confused."oh cause i wanted to come back out here and see u and kevin to come with me so he could calm down of what happened".kelly answered."so were still together right"jeremy asked."oh of course. me and kevin r just friends."kelly added."ok so what happened"jeremy asking another question."sarah was kissing another boy when i walked in the bathroom"kelly said annoyed at the thought of it."oh my god i am so sorry kevin."jeremy said putting his hand on kevins shoulder while he said that."Oh im not the one thats going to be sorry."kevin said."sarah is".kevin added.
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Post by Arwen07 on Dec 23, 2004 19:20:37 GMT -5
WoW! So good! It's gettin real good! ;D
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 23, 2004 19:38:11 GMT -5
well thank u.well guys im so sorry but i wont be able to post till late tomorow and i wont be able to post at all on christmas.but keep your hopes up cause i might be able to post early tomorrow before i leave for the mall with my dad to buy my mom some gifts so bye bye
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Post by hannahk on Dec 23, 2004 22:58:41 GMT -5
its very good. can't wait for more!
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 24, 2004 9:17:26 GMT -5
more on later ;D
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Post by Ashley on Dec 24, 2004 11:48:57 GMT -5
its soooooo soooo good!
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 24, 2004 16:17:09 GMT -5
ill do more tonight.gotta think
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 24, 2004 19:01:20 GMT -5
im gonna wait till sunday actually cause i cant think of any thing and also tomoprrows christmas so.but ill get to it i promise
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Post by Brooke on Dec 26, 2004 12:11:12 GMT -5
WOW  Its really good!  |
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 26, 2004 14:19:26 GMT -5
thanks il be on it tonight.i got a few ideas
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Post by jeremydudette on Dec 27, 2004 12:22:03 GMT -5
chapter 12
Kevin walked out of the club furiously while pushing every one that got in his way.
"man hes tence"kelly said."well when your girlfriend cheats on u like that well yeah people get tence"jeremy replied."i hope he doesnt do anything to hurt sarah.i mean just because im mad at her doesnt mean i stopped caring about her"kelly said in a worried voice."wel do u want to go check on sarah in the bathroom with me"jerem said putting his hand one kelly's shoulder."yeah lets go check and see if shes allright"kelly answered and they starte walking.they went back up to the bathroom door and when they got there they opened it.sarah wasnt there.kelly and jeremy checked all the bathroom stalls but she wasnt in any of them."what do u think happened to her"kelly said in a trembling voice."i think i know"jeremy said looking at the sink.kelly walked over t jeremy and looked in the sink he was looking in.there was blood in it every where.kelly suddenly felt a strong cold wind come in and looked in the direction of where it had came from.The window was cracked open.
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