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Post by dreamgirlann on May 23, 2005 13:12:29 GMT -5
tnx,you guys,..Im so glad you like my stories!!! ;Dtnx a lot!
CHAPTER 15
At lunch.Jeremy is like ever sitting with Evian and her friends and Ashley and Caroline are like always alone,cause they like it that way.The song from Jay z and Linkin park starts to play in the dining-hall.Ashley and Caroline go nuts and start to sing along. C:Wooooooow! A:Thank you,thank you your far to kind!! C:Yeah,yeah,..Come on,gril..Sing it! A: Can I get an encore,do you want more?!! C:Go ashley ,go Ashley!! They start to laugh and sing further.They re so loud the table right by them,hears their singing.And the cheerleaders get all b**chy. E: (rolls with her eyes)O my god!Who do they think they are? K.K:Like nobody!! M.J:Remember what she did on Jimmys party? K.K: Oh yeah... E: (interested,confused)What?What has she done? M.J:She was like sooo drunk that she took of her shirt and danced on a table with only her bra on!! E: (shocked)No!She didnt!! K.K:Yeah,she did! E: Well,would you look at that!.....It looks like Heather isnt the only s**t in the class! They start to laugh.But Jeremy,who heard their whole conversation is angry and pi**ed off. J:Hey! They stop laughing and look at him. J:Ashley is no s**t!Understand? E:What is your problem....?.....Are you like her friend now? J:So? E: So...Shes such a freak!Come on! J: Ok,Thats it!....(stands up,takes his plate and school bag.) E:What are you doing? J:When you stop talking about her like that...let me know! He turns away and goes. K.K: Oh girl..You need to watch out for your man!...I dont know whats going on bettween them but.... E:Shut up Kiki! They keep looking at him when he goes to Ashleys and Carolines table.He steps to them and stops,looking at them.They look at him confused. C:Am....Yes? J:Sorry,but...Can I sit down and have lunch with you two? C:What?Wait?.....You?You the football player,the famous leader and popular dude want to sit with us?The losers? J: Am.........Yap!thats what I said.. C:Wait here!I got to get a camera!! A: Caroline stop it!.....Sure you can! Jeremy smiles at her and sits down.Caroline looks at her wierd and then grabs her arm,strong,stands up and starts to pull her away. A: Ouuu!Hey that hurts!! C: (stops)What are you now?Mother Thereza or what? A: What are you talking about? C: Are you like freinds with that jerk or I dont know... A;:Yeah..Maybe I am.So? C: Oh,god.. A: Dont be such a baby and stop it! C: Something is wrong, I dont know what,but you dont want to tell me! A: everything is fine ok!? She gets back to the table and sits down by Jeremy.Caroline follows her,but doesnt sit down.She takes her plate and looks at them. J:Hey where are you going? C: Im not hungry anymore! She looks dissapointed and goes away.Ashley doesnt feel well,because she had to lie to her best friend and everything.Shes not in a good mude,but when she looks at Jeremy he smiles. J:Everything ok? A: (lies)Yeah,everything is fine! J: Ok,Then lets eat,...If she isnt hungry,well I am! Ashley laughs and they start to eat,talking like friends,calmly and normal.
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Post by dancergrl08 on May 23, 2005 14:19:06 GMT -5
That was grreat!!!! i love it!!!!
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Post by jeremydudette on May 23, 2005 14:31:51 GMT -5
great.write more asap
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Post by hannahk on May 23, 2005 17:11:33 GMT -5
very good! keep it up girlie!
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Post by blondechica2006 on May 23, 2005 17:37:09 GMT -5
PLZ POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by dreamgirlann on May 24, 2005 9:59:24 GMT -5
tnx! CHAPTER 16 Next hour,P.E.They re in the jim.Ashley is putting her stuff together. A*:Would you know it?Today has to be the day we have dance lessons! She looks at Jeremy for a second and smiles.Jeremy is talking to his friends,when he suddenly sees Evian,walking towards them.He panicks. J: Oh no! B:What? B:Evian!...Sorry gotta go.. He turns around and runs up to Ashley.He taps her on the shoulder and she turns around,confused. A:Hey!Whats Up? He grabs her shoulders and starts to panick. J:You got to help me!(starts to shake her) A: ok,ok...But stop shaking me!Im not a toy,you know... J: sorry,but you got to dance with me! A:Why? J:I dont wanna dance with Evian.. A:Wh...? J:never mind!Please!!! A: Ok.I ll dance with you!! J: thanks! Right then Evian come up to them smiling at Jeremy.She just wants to say something,but Jeremy panicks and taps,basicaly hits Ashley on her back. J:Hey!!!!!!!!!!Ashley,wanna dance with me(loud)? He couldnt control his strenght and hit her kinda strong.Ashley starts to cough. A*: Ouuc!Hey that hurt ! A: *cough**cough*....Yeah sure!(sarcasticaly) Evian just keeps staring at them,with her mouth wide open.She doesnt say anything,she just looks at them,angry,but dissapointed.Mrs.Loyd,The P.E.Teacher walks up to them and whistles. M.L: Ok,OK...Find your partners and take your places!!! Jeremy grabs Ashleys hand and quickly pulls her after him. Everybody is standing where they re supposed to be.,couples.Jeremy turns to Ashley and smiles.She looks at him a little bit pi**ed off. J: (confused)Why are you looking at me like that? A: Yeah,Thanks,..Couldnt you hit me a little more stonger back then? J: Sorry,...I panicked! A: Yeah I saw! M.L: (whistles)Ok,...Take your positions!! Jeremy and Ashley start to get a little nervous.Jeremy smiles and steps closer to her.He puts his hand around her waist and she slowly raises her hand to his shoulder.He softly grabs her other hand and although they seems close,they are far appart.Ashley keeps staring at the floor but When she raises her head he looks at her and they both smile.Suddenly the teacher Mrs.Loyd walks up to them. M.L: No,no!!You re standing too much appart! She puts one hand on Ashleys back and the other on Jeremys and pushes them together.Ashley and Jeremy basicaly hug. M.L: here!Thats more like it!.....Oh.. They both look at her. M.L: you two make a great couple!! Jeremy and Ashley just smile and Mrs.Loyd goes further.But as soon as she leaves Ashleys heart starts to beat like crazy.She gets really nervous,like never before.She starts to shake a little and cant stop. A*: O gosh!I feel like I have a thousand butterflys in my stomach!.......What the hell is that?
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Post by juicy14 on May 24, 2005 10:16:30 GMT -5
ahhhh she's in love with him hehe lol
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Post by thimbles4JerBear on May 24, 2005 10:48:09 GMT -5
Heck Yes! She is in love with him...(I think)
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Post by dancergrl08 on May 24, 2005 14:33:42 GMT -5
Awww, that is so cute!! man, i wish i had dancing lessons in my gym class, then i could dance with my crush that looks like Jeremy Sumpter!!! ahh! i like died when i saw him, and he is so nice!!! yeah, anaways, your story is awesome!!! i love it!! add more soon!
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Post by jeremydudette on May 24, 2005 16:53:28 GMT -5
keep going asap
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Post by blondechica2006 on May 24, 2005 17:12:49 GMT -5
PLZ POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by hannahk on May 24, 2005 22:17:09 GMT -5
ooooh cute!!! they got to dance with eachother !
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Post by dreamgirlann on May 29, 2005 2:19:42 GMT -5
CHAPTER 17
Ashley feels her heart beating faster and faster.She slowly breathes out and Jeremy starts to laugh.She looks up at him,with a confused look on her face. A:What are you laughing at? J:You! A:Me? J:Yeah... A:Why? J: Doh,..You re shaking..Like your whole body is shivering... A: (blushes,looks down on the floor)Well,..I...I am just... J: No problem.Im also a little nervous! A: (is lying)Im not nervous!! J: (raised eyebrow)You arent,hm? A: (still lying)No! J: (laughs)Then its just me,I guess.... At that point she looks up at him and hes looking at her,smiling sweet.She can do anything but smile. M.L: (whistles)Ok,......Lets try the waltz,alright?!! Ashley makies a dumb face. A:Why do we have to learn how to dance a waltz? J: Dont ask me! A:But I hate dancing the waltz!!(wining like a baby) J:You ll survive!(laughs) M.L: Ok!!Ready! The teacher turns on the music and they start to dance.Ashley feels so uncomfortable,but somehow she feels attracted to him and likes to be near him.With one step after a nother Ashley forgets about her being nervous and all and enjoys dancing with him.
After P.E. is over,the teacher turns off the music. M.L: That all for today!See you on Wednesday! The couples stop dancing and slowly start to take their stuff,leaving.Jeremy and Ashley stop dancing and look at eachother smiling. J:So?Was it that bad? A:No!It was actually fun!Im suprised you know!You a good dancer!I never noticed that! J: Of course you didnt!You never danced with! Ashley laughs,but Evian doesnt.Shes standing behind them with a group of friends,listening to their conversation.And shes really pi**ed off.She has enough.She comes up to her and as quickly as she does that,she pushes her away and steps infront of Jeremy. A:Hey!Whats your problem!?? E:You know what my problem is! A: Oh,let me guess!You re afraid I going to steal you your boyfriend? E:Yes,exactly!But Im not afraid!But You should be! A: (is making fun of her)Im soo scared!Like whatever Evian!Dont make me laugh! E: Just stay away from him! J: Evian,would you stop it! A: No, Jeremy!...Thanks,but I think we should forget about the friendship thing!This blondy just doesnt get it! She looks at her one more time,turns around and leaves.Jeremy keeps standing behind Evian,with a dissapointed look on his face.
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Post by dreamgirlann on May 29, 2005 4:28:58 GMT -5
CHAPTER 18
In the hallway Ashley sees Caroline,by her locker.They havent talked since that thing at lunch. A*: thats enough! She steps to her and Caroline just looks at her. A: Why are you so angry at me? C: Im not! A: ok,So I used to say hes a jerk,but things change!He seems to be a nice guy,you know.. C:Why?Why all of a sudden? Ashely feels the panick again,but keeps on lying. A:I dont know!What do you have against him? C:Nothing!Its just wierd....... A:Caroline...Your my best friend! C:I know!.....Your also my best friend!(smiles) A:So...Your not mad at me? C: No!Of course not! Caroline puts her arm around her shoulders and they get into their classroom.
In history class everything seems to be fine.But its not.Ashley keeps staring at Jeremy siting infront of her.Thoughts go through her mind,different thoughts,strange thoughts,thoughts shes never had. A*:What is this?Its like Im sick or something!......My heart is beating so fast and Im all nervous when hes around!I cant take this anymore!!!!I dont know if Im supposed to hate him or like him!....Oh,god!My head is going to explode!!! T.T:Ashley!!!! Suddenly Ashley wakes up from her daydream and shakes her head. A:What?? T.T: Pay atteniton!!! A: oh,...Sorry! The teacher goes on.Ashley rolls sarcasticaly with her eyes and the teacher sees her. T.T:Is something wrong Ashley? A:No! T.T:Then why are you rolling with your eyes. A:No big deal... T.T:Ashley! A: (makes a dumb face)This is stupid! T.T:Then please!...(points to the door)There is the door!You can leave! A:Fine!I will! She takes her stuff and school bag and goes out.Angry.Everybodys staring at her.She closes the door after herself and throws her bag on the floor.She leans on a few lockers,a little angry,but calms down.She crosses her arms and looks down at fer feet,lost in her thoughts.Suddenly the door of the classroom opens and Jeremy comes out.He throws his bag on the floor,right next to Ashleys and Steps to her.Shes looking at him confused.He leans on a locker right next to her and starts to stare infront of him,with a smile on his face. A:what are you doing here? J:I also thought it was stupid! A: I didnt go out because i thought the class was stupid! J:Then why? A: (hesitates)....Oh,..Forget it! J: (looks at her)You know....About Evian...She just has a big mouth !Thats all.....We can still be friends! Ashley cant shut up.She moves away and stands on her feet. A:Well maybe I dont want to be just your friend Jeremy!! She stops and bites her lips. A*:crap!Me and my big mouth!Great! J: (confused)What do you mean? A: Its because of you!It was so normal to hate you!!And now that I like you everything is different!! Jeremy steps infront of her,looking like hes demending an answer. J:You like me? A:Jeremy.... J:No!tell me !......Do you like me? Ashley looks on the floor,closing her eyes.But then she looks up at him.She slowly raises her hands,to his cheeks. J: (nervously,looking into her eyes)What are you doing? A: I just need to know! She comes closer and closer. A:Just one.......Little.....Kiss! She kisses him,just so their lips touch.But suddenly that on little kiss doesnt seem to end.That little kiss,becomes one big,passionatly kiss......ing.
******************************************** Sugababes,too lost in you:
You look into my eyes, I go out of my mind. I cant see anything, cause this loves got me blind. I cant Tell myself,I can break this spell, I cant even try.... Im in over my head,you got under my skin, I got no strenght at all, In this state that Im in. And my knees are week and my mouth cant speak, For all this time.... Baby Im too lost in you,lost in everything about you so deep I cant sleep I just think,think about the things that you do. Im too lost in you! ********************************************
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Post by greenEyedsoul on May 29, 2005 8:06:53 GMT -5
OMG!!!!! so cute!!!!
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