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Post by juicy14 on Nov 5, 2004 10:10:56 GMT -5
wow another surprise? she's soooooooooo lucky! *lol*
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 7, 2004 22:08:23 GMT -5
I'm so sad. lol. No one really reads my story anymore or at least doesn't respond and give me comments or criticism.
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Post by juicy14 on Nov 8, 2004 11:19:19 GMT -5
hey I'm still reading and I really like it it's soooooo good! your story is one of the first I started to read when I came to this board because I knew it from another site I think it was network.com or sumthing like that. anyway plz write more I luv it ;D
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 13, 2004 23:41:36 GMT -5
Finally the car stopped and Jeremy took the blindfold off. You were in front of a movie theater and no one was there. “Where is everyone?” you asked curiously. “Obviously not here.” he said smiling. You playfully pushed him. “Actually I reserved the movie theater tonight for just the two of us.”<br> “How sweet. So what are we going to watch?”<br> “You’ll see.”said Jeremy as he grabbed your hand and walked you into the movie theater. You had chills running down your spine every time that Jeremy touched you and soon it would be all over and you would once again be alone in Montana. You walked into the theater and noticed that near the front were two seats all by themselves with popcorn, candy, and soda on little side tables next to them. You were amazed at how much thought Jeremy was putting into making this night perfect. Now you were just wondering what movie you were going to be watching. First, you watched “The Incredibles” because Jeremy was able to get it in advance before anyone else. The both of you laughed during the whole thing. After it was over you started to get out of your seat, but Jeremy grabbed your hand and gently pulled you back into your seat. “There’s more.” he whispered into your ear. You sat back down and laid your head down on his shoulder. Just then you saw Jessie’s face on the screen. She was at the beach where you guys first met. “This is the story of two lovers, the perfect couple, my brother and best friend. About California Dreams : 1 girl, 3 dreams, 1 summer.” she said. Then it slowly faded into the start of the whole summer. The day that you met Jessica, the day she introduced you to Jeremy, and your whole summer. Everyone that you meant that summer was in it. Even Carrie and her new boyfriend. As the movie neared the end, tears started to stream down your cheeks. Jeremy looked at you and smiled. You glanced back up at the screen and you saw Jeremy’s face. “Alexa, I love you so much. You are the best girl a guy could ever ask for. I hope that we can handle this long distance relationship. I know we can we just have to believe and trust in the love that we share for each other. California Summer Dreams : 1 girl, 3 dreams, forever.” Then his face slowly faded away and your eyes drifted away from the screen and once again you saw Jeremy’s face except this time it was in person and he was right next to you. As you looked at his face and saw the look in his eyes you knew that you would never forget him no matter what. You kissed him passionately for what seemed like forever and then the two of you slowly pulled away at the same moment. “Thanks Jer. I love you.” you said. You couldn’t think of anything else to say but you knew that that was enough. “I love you to Alexa. I also have a copy of that for you. So that if you ever want to see me you can just pop it in your vcr and watch it.”<br> “Can’t I just watch Peter Pan?” you joked. “You could, but this is the real me. I hope that you cherish this forever and never forget me.” said Jeremy and he pulled you into a hug. “I will.”<br> You and Jeremy left the theater hand in hand and he drove you back to your house. He was going to drop you off tomorrow at the airport because he couldn’t stand not seeing for that long. He just couldn’t do anything with that before hand because he had work. You two shared another passionate kiss and then Jeremy left. You walked inside and went to bed. Not wanting tomorrow to approach.
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Post by juicy14 on Nov 14, 2004 4:35:09 GMT -5
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm speechless that was sooooooooooooooooo good plz keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 25, 2004 19:41:51 GMT -5
Chapter 12: Section 8
You woke up the next morning feeling very tired because you were not able to sleep the night before. All you could think about was leaving LA and all that came with it. Your life was completely changed and you had no idea how it was going to effect your senior year of high school. This year was going to be a huge part of your life and nothing was going to be the same again. If everything went okay with Jeremy you were going to apply to UCLA or a different school in California so that you could spend more time with Jeremy. It would feel awkward dating down but it was going to have to work out if you loved Jeremy. After just laying in bed for a few minutes you walked into the main house and into the kitchen. You could smell your favorite meal being cooked, french toast souffle. You joined your uncle and cousins at the table and waited for breakfast to be ready. You couldn’t believe that this was your last day in California for awhile. The summer went by so fast and it felt like you had just arrived in California yesterday. Finally the souffle was done and your aunt sat down at the table and served everyone. “So Alexa what are you going to do today during your last day in California?” your aunt asked as she sat down at the table. “I thought that I’d just spend the day with you guys because I feel bad for not spending that much time here. I’m always out with Jeremy doing something. When the real reason I came here was to see all of you.” you said. “That’s okay we knew that was going to happen. Just so long as you had a good time while you were here.” “I had a great time.” “Ya your life is completely different from when you first arrived here. I haven’t told your parents about anything that happened while you were here. I’m leaving that all up to you. I thought it would be better if you told them in person.” “I don’t even know where to begin. Three of my biggest dreams have come true and I’m so happy. I just don’t know how I am going to adapt to my old life in Montana again after all of this. I have know idea what to tell kids at my school. The only one that knows about everything is Carrie. I haven’t gotten the chance to tell the rest of my friends. I don’t want anyone to treat me any differently.” “Alexa don’t be worried about all that stuff. You’ll decide once you start school again. I bet everyone knows about you anyways. You are all over the papers and TV.” “That’s probably true, but I could say that it was all a lie. I guess you’re right. I don’t need to worry about all of this stuff right now. It can wait.” you said as you took the last bite of your souffle.
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 25, 2004 21:37:07 GMT -5
Chapter 12: Section 9 After you finished eat you cleared your plate and went back into the pool house so that you could change. You took a shower and shaved your legs making them nice and smooth. You put on your white roxy swimsuit with a black skirt and a light blue roxy shirt. Then you slid on your white sequined platform flip flops. Next you quickly put your hair into a mussy bun and grabbed your surfboard that was laying by your bed. You ran back into the main house and saw your aunt, uncle, and cousins waiting for you in the living room with all their beach stuff. All of you left in your uncles BMW convertible and went to the beach. You had a great time with your family at the beach. You showed off all of your surfing moves and they were very impressed. You also gave Hannah some tips on surfing that you got from your couch. Finally it was getting close for you to leave. So everyone packed up their stuff and drove back to their house. Once you got home, you changed out of your swimsuit and put your other clothes back on and finished packing all of your stuff. It was very hard for you to get everything to fit especially your surfboard since during your stay you gained a bunch of clothes. Your aunt decided that you would just have to leave your surfboard at their house because you had nowhere to put it. You looked around the pool house for anything that you might have left and found the necklace that Jeremy had given you laying on your dresser. ‘I can’t forget this’ you thought to yourself and put it around your neck as a tear started to stream down your soft cheek. Slowly, you pulled your suitcases out of the pool house and into the living room. You couldn’t believe that you were already leaving. You heard a car pull into the driveway and knew that it was Jeremy. He slowly walked up the steps and rang the doorbell. You wandered over to the door and slowly opened it. You smiled when you saw Jeremy standing there with a bouquet of roses in his hand. He handed them to you and pulled you into a hug. A tear dropped onto your shoulder and you looked up to see Jeremy crying. Your aunt and the rest walked into the room after they heard the doorbell ring and saw you and Jeremy hugging so they waited before they said anything. When you were finished they approached you and gave you a huge group hug. Your aunt gave you a couple DVDs to watch on the plane and an IPOD. You thanked her and gave everyone another hug then walked out the door holding Jeremy’s hand with tears flowing down your cheeks. When you got to the limo you saw Jessica and Gigi with tears starting to form in their eyes. You and Jeremy sat across from them still holding hands and cuddling. It was a long and silent ride to the airport with just a bunch of crying and hugging. When you got there Jeremy helped you out of the limo and Jess and Gigi followed closely behind. You got your bags checked and made your way over to your gate. They let Jeremy, Jess, and Gigi in because they were famous and you were becoming famous. Along the all of you had gotten mobbed by a bunch of guys and girls. The guys were mostly wanting to see you, but there were also girls that wanted to see you as well. You were surprised by the amount of people that knew who you were. You thought that you were not that well known. You started to worry because you didn’t want it to be like this back home in Montana. It got awfully annoying after awhile. Finally they announced that it was time for the first class to board the plane. You gave Jess and Gigi a hug and then they left leaving you and Jeremy alone. It was a very quiet goodbye. The only words that were exchanged were “I love you” and “I promise I will never forget you.” Then you both slowly leaned in and shared the best kiss that you’ve ever had. You felt butterflies in your stomach and you never wanted the kiss to end. You slowly parted and walked very slowly to the ticket taker. You looked back once again before you boarded and saw Jeremy’s face covered in tears. You got on the airplane and turned on your IPOD with tears streaming don your face and slowly went to sleep. swimsuit www.buckle.com/images/us/local/products/viewlarger/74910621469_lg.jpg a black skirt images1.pacsun.com/products/0707471.psd.xml?cmp-show=Background&cmp-show=01&cmp-hide=00&cmp-hide=02&cmp-end=1&wid=320&qlt=90&cvt=jpeg
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Post by s0t0tallyd0rky on Nov 26, 2004 1:15:48 GMT -5
omg it made me cry!! so0o0o sadddddd
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 27, 2004 21:37:39 GMT -5
I still haven't decided if that is going to be the end or not. Let's vote. I need at least 10 before I continue. From this post on.
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 28, 2004 20:29:50 GMT -5
Chapter 13: Section 1
You slept listening to music during the entire flight since there was no stops in between. You woke up to the sound of the flight attendant telling everyone welcome to Montana. You were excited and sad at the same time that you were finally home after 3 months in California. You slowly got out of your seat and made your way off of the airplane and into the airport. You saw your family along with Carrie and all your other friends standing there waiting for you. You ran up to all of them and gave each of them a hug except for your brother. You and your brother NEVER gave each other a hug. You didn’t really get along with him that well. Then you went to baggage claim and grabbed all of your bags. Your parents went to go get the car so that it would be easier to put everything in it. Leaving your friends, your brother, and you alone. “Geez Alexa. You sure do have a lot of bags and they are really heavy.” your brother said to you and your friends and you laughed. “I did a lot of shopping over the summer and I was there for 3 months. This isn’t even all of it. I left my surfboard at our cousin’s house. There should also be a car coming soon.” you replied. “A car! What kind of car?” asked all of your friends at the same time. “A mini cooper convertible.” you smiled. “No fair. That’s the car that I’ve always wanted. Where did you get that?” said Carrie in disbelief. “Ya you can’t afford that.” said Darcie and Rachel. “I know I can’t it was a gift.” you said back. “From who?” they asked. “Jeremy?” asked Carrie and immediately you gave her the sign to zip her mouth. “Jeremy who?” asked Darcie. “Uh...no one.” you tried to cover, but it didn’t exactly work. Your friends knew you too well. “Did you get a boyfriend over the summer?” asked Rachel. “Well...” you tried to say, but you were interrupted by Carrie. “She did!” she said and then she covered her mouth. “So did you Carrie.” you said. “We already knew that. He’s really cute.” said Darcie. “When are we going to meet him? Is he hot?” asked Rachel. “He’s so hot, but the problem is that he lives in LA so I don’t know if I’ll ever see him again.” you said to them. “Ya he’s so cute.” said Carrie. “You got to meet him?” Darcie asked Carrie. “Yep.”<br> “Is he Al’s type?” asked Darcie. “He sure is. They are perfect for each other except the part that he’s 15.” Carrie blurted out. “Carrie you can never keep your mouth shut.” you told her with a giggle and then you began to blush. “Sorry Al.” said Carrie. “So Al, now you are falling for the younger guys. Is he short like all the rest of the kids that you like? Just kidding.” said Darcie. “No he’s not short he’s 5'11" you said. “So what’s he like?” asked Rachel. “He’s great. I love him. I was bawling when we went to the airport. I need to watch a movie when I get home.”<br> “You mean Peter Pan?” said Carrie. “You mean that movie with that little boy in it that Alexa is obsessed with. I really don’t think he’s that cute.” retorted Darcie. Then you and Carrie started laughing. “What’s so funny?” asked Darcie. “Nothing. Nothing at all.” you and Carrie said at the same time. “Yay right.”<br> “I’m starting to agree with Alexa that he is really cute.” said Carrie. “What made you change your mind?” asked Rachel. “When I met him in LA.” replied Carrie. “You met him?” asked Rachel. “Yep. He’s Alexa’s boyfriend.” said Carrie without realizing what she had just said. “What?” said Rachel and Darcie at the same time. “Alexa you are dating a movie star and you didn’t tell us? How did this all happen?” asked Darcie. “Carrie!” you said. “Sorry. I really didn’t mean for that to come out. I’ll let you tell them the rest when you are ready.” said Carrie apologetically. “Yes I am dating Jeremy Sumpter. I didn’t want to tell you guys because I didn’t how you would react. I met his sister at the beach and we became friends. Then she set Jeremy and I up. I can’t believe you didn’t know any of this. We were all over the papers in LA. You would not believe how many autographs I had to sign while I was there. You guys can’t tell anyone. I don’t want everyone at school treating me any differently. Especially with all the other stuff that happened.”<br> “Other stuff?” asked Rachel. “I’ll tell you later because my parents are coming and I don’t want to tell them just yet. Ryan you can’t tell them anything.” you said but he wasn’t there anymore. ‘Phew’ you thought to yourself. Your parents came up and grabbed your bags. You all followed them to the car and all got inside. “Shhh...” you mouthed to your friends.
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Post by Guest on Dec 1, 2004 23:05:47 GMT -5
This is soooooo great, plz keep going
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Post by blondechica2006 on Dec 5, 2004 10:47:02 GMT -5
Chapter 13: Section 2
Whoops! I just realized that I said you were going to be a senior in the last chapter. This is actually going to be your junior year and Jeremy’s a sophomore.
It was a long ride home. Your parents asked you about your trip and you told them everything except about your new found fame. You told them about Jeremy, but you didn’t mention that he was Jeremy Sumpter, the famous actor. You just told them that you got a boyfriend in California. They were very happy for you. They told you that he could visit whenever he wanted to. When you finally got home Carrie, Darcie, and Rachel helped you Carrie your bags up to your room. When you opened your door, your jaw dropped. It was completely different. Before it was light pink with flowers everywhere. Now it had a beach theme to it. Your posters from Peter Pan were the only things that remained the same. You had new furniture, a queen sized bed, a new laptop, and a new stereo. Your parents came in moments later. “So what do you think?” your mom asked. “It’s great.” you said and you gave both of them a hug. “Your welcome, but your friends also helped with the painting and theme. They also told us to leave up your posters even though your dad and I didn’t want to. We thought that you were growing up and you were always telling us that you wanted to redo your room.” said your mom. “Thanx girls.” you said and gave each of them a hug. “No problem we thought that you would like it.” said Carrie. “Do you guys want to spend the night tonight?” you asked. “We thought that you would ask. Our stuff is already here. We already asked your parents and ours. Your parents basically invited us. That way we can all walk to school tomorrow.” said Carrie. “Have you already compared our schedules?”you asked. “Ya we all have Chemistry and Study Hall together. We have no idea if we all have lunch together or not.” said Darcie. “Well that class will be fun especially study hall. Now let’s go see if anyone is online right now.” you said walking over to your computer. “Does Jeremy have messenger?” asked Carrie. “Not that I know of. I don’t think that he does because he doesn’t want any of his fans to get a hold of it.”<br> “That sux.” said Carrie. You sat down in your chair in front of computer and logged onto MSN messenger and AIM. None of your friends were on so you turned off the monitor and sat down on your floor in a circle with your friends. Moments later you heard your computer beep. The sound that it makes when someone on aim is trying to talk to you. You took your laptop and set it next to you in the circle and turned the screen back on. A message popped up from AIM. Would you like to accept a message from SunStar06? You accepted the message and another one popped up.
SurfStar07: Hey! JSpartygurl06: Hi. Who’s this? SurfStar07: Guess! JSpartygurl06: I have no clue. JSpartygurl06: Too many people know my screen name. JSpartygurl06: It could be anyone. JSpartygurl06: Is it someone from the board? SurfStar07: What board? JSpartygurl06: I guess not if you don’t know what I am talking about. SurfStar07: I’m not from the board. JSpartygurl06: Okay. That narrows it down a bit. JSpartygurl06: Hmm...who could it be? *thinks* JSpartygurl06: *sigh* I have no idea. Just tell me.
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Post by guest on Dec 5, 2004 11:58:00 GMT -5
that is soooo great, keep it up ;D
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Post by The Giver on Dec 6, 2004 19:51:02 GMT -5
This is sooooooo great, i'm on the edge of my seat, PLEASE write more. lots more. lol
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Post by hannahk on Dec 9, 2004 6:45:17 GMT -5
OOOOOOO I love it agrubbs!!!!! The suspence is killing me!!! i liked your story so much, that everyday when im free, i try to go to the comp. to finish reading your story. Well i finally have, and i cant wait for the rest!!!
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