casurfurgirl
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Sometimes loosing the simplest pleasures of life can cause you extreme and complex pain.....
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Post by casurfurgirl on Jun 12, 2005 13:18:26 GMT -5
Hey guys, I am new here, and decided that I wanted to start a fan fiction....so, here it goes....tell me how you like it!
"Well?" "Well, I am sorry, but we are going to have to run some more tests to be sure." "Is that good?" "Well, it could go either way, it could be that there is nothing wrong, and it could be that the problem is serious and hidden." "Oh, I see...well, what do I tell her?" "That is strictly up to you, but, I suggest breaking the news over something nice, like ice cream." "Ok, thanks for your help."
"About time!" exclaimed Ryan as her mum walked out of the examination room. She had been sitting outside on a hard, wooden bench for what seemed like an hour when in reality it had been only a few minutes. "So, what's up? What did the ol' quack say?" "Not much...hey, do you want some ice cream? I am craving it!!!!!" "Yeah, I guess so....I'm not really hungry though, but, since it's ice cream, I think I can manage to eat it," laughed Ryan. She and her mum walked out of the doctor's office and to their Pontiac. It was just the two of them living together. They were happy, though sometimes they had a little trouble making ends meet, but everything always worked out fine. Ryan was about five foot two and had medium length, brown hair. Her eyes were a hazel green and she was just right around the middle...skinny, but not grotesquely small. She was a mirror image of her mum, minus the fact that her mother looked older than her and was a little taller. On their way to the Ice Creamery, Ryan's favorite ice cream parlor, she noticed that her mum was being silent. She knew better than to try and make her talk, so she just let it go and turned on the radio to a station where they played an array of songs. One of her favorite 80's hits was playing, Love In an Elevator, so she turned it up and began to sing along with it.
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casurfurgirl
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Sometimes loosing the simplest pleasures of life can cause you extreme and complex pain.....
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Post by casurfurgirl on Jun 12, 2005 16:18:09 GMT -5
"You aren't eating very much," said Bell, Ryan's mum. "Yeah, well, my stomach hurts." Ryan was sitting with her arms around her knees and her feet on her chair. "About that," said Bell, a little uneasily. Upon hearing these words, Ryan looked up uneasily. She had a worried expression that seemed painted across her face. "You know something, don't you? The doctor told you that something is wrong with me, didn't he? Don't keep this hidden from me mum!!! Just tell me!" her voice was rising with every word she spoke. She hated it when people kept secrets about her. She just wanted to know what was wrong...if she knew, she would feel better. The only problem was, no one seemed to understand that. "Don't be mad at me honey. This is just as hard for me as it is for you." Ryan impatiently rolled her eyes. "Well, if you don't want me to be mad, then tell me." There was now a harsh tone in the 16 year-old's voice. She was looking her mother dead in the eye, a look that demanded the truth. "Well, they said that they will have to run more tests. Either there is nothing wrong or it is something serious and hidden." "Well the I can tell you that it is something serious, because why would I get pains like these if there was nothing wrong??!!" Tears were slowly, but steadily coming from the young girl's eyes. How Bell hated to see her only child like this. It was painful for her. "I just want to go home," whimpered Ryan. She stood uyp slowly and dragged her feet all the way to the car.
"So, if you would like to win a date with our mysterie star, call in when you hear the key song!!!!! You know what that is!" 'Ah sh*t,' thought Ryan, 'of course i turn on the radio right after they say what song is the winning one.' "I know what you're thinking," said Camiell. "And i agree, just our luck eh? So what song do you think it is?" "Hmm, I don't know, but we can jsut keep calling in until we find out....or, we can just guess." Camiell and Ryan were best friends. They had met their first semester of high school, so they had'nt even known eachother for a whole year, but they already were closer than sisters. "It's this one," exclaimed Ryan when she heard Feelin' Way Too Damn Good play loudly from the speakers. "Well, then....call it for heaven's sake!!" Camiell threw Ryan the phone and she quickly dialed the number. the first time, she dialed the wrong number because her fingers were moving so fast, so she tried once again....
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Post by dancergrl08 on Jun 12, 2005 16:25:40 GMT -5
Haha, Hey Abby! it's Dorothy!! Your story is awesome hun!!! Different from the other one's, i like it! You better post it on the other site soon!!!! I love it, it's grreat! Add more soon!!!
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Post by thimbles4JerBear on Jun 12, 2005 21:01:29 GMT -5
Hey really good. It's very different from other stories here. And that's rad. Love the story so far...makes me wanna know what's wrong with her...and who the mystery person is...post more soon
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Post by hannahk on Jun 12, 2005 22:42:53 GMT -5
sweet! this story is awsome!! i like how the title ties in with the story
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Post by peacefulducky on Jun 13, 2005 0:00:26 GMT -5
OMG! That is so SAD! She doesn't have cancer does she, cause that would just be overly depressing. I don't think I would be able to handle it. Oh yeah, ummm, I loved it. I was AWESOME! Oh SNAGGLEPUSS, you so gotta put this on the other site. Everyone is gonna love it. Course, who wouldn't? I don't know! Do you know? Cause I don't know? LOL! Add more soon hun! I'm lovin' it! -Ducky
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Post by dreamgirlann on Jun 13, 2005 12:09:12 GMT -5
i think its a great start!!!add more soon!
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casurfurgirl
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Sometimes loosing the simplest pleasures of life can cause you extreme and complex pain.....
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Post by casurfurgirl on Jun 13, 2005 15:27:52 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys!!!!!
"Hello? And who is this?" "Ryan Camo," she answered shyly to the disc jockey. Her face was fuoll of shock. So it was possible for her to have luck, and not the bad kind! "Well Miss Camo, you are our lucky winner! Do you know what you have just won?" His voice was full of energy, the total opposite from that of Ryan's who's was tired and shocked at the same time. "Well," she bagan unsurely, "I turned on the radio a little late, but I heard sosmething about a mystery date with a star or something to that effect." "Well my little lady, you are correct!!! You and Connie Wilson are going to spend a day together!" "Awesome," reolied Ryan. Wilson was a teenager in their state that had been discovered and was actually a good actor, but definatly better at modeling. After she recievedall the information from the station, she put the phone back on the reciever and looked at Camiell. "So?" "I'm going on da-ate!! I'm going on a da-ate!!" chanted Ryan. She was doing a strange littel dance all throught her room that resembled the hokey-pokey. "And what is so different about that little missy?" Camiell was laughing at her friend's mad moves. Ryan stopped to look at her friend. "Well, you know Connie Wilson?" At the sound of his name Camiell's eyes grew wide. "I'm going on a date with him, I'm going on a date with him!!"
hey guys, sorry this is so short.....i was gonna write way more, but something came up....hugs and thimbles!!! -Abigaile
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Post by dancergrl08 on Jun 13, 2005 18:23:59 GMT -5
awesome hun! i can't wait to read more!
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Post by hannahk on Jun 13, 2005 22:32:13 GMT -5
thats awsome!! a definate twist to what i was expecting!! i like that a lot!!
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Post by peacefulducky on Jun 13, 2005 22:48:01 GMT -5
Dude that's awesome. One question though. Who is Connie Wilson, and why would his parents name him that? LOL! That's great, little missy. Man, I'm gonna have that saying stuck in my head now. Oh well, I like it. It's cute. Oh SNAGGLE PUSS! I just remembered something. I haven't had my wonderful hyper out burst. Well I must do it quick now won't I. Ok, here it goes. Ready? hfdayhiohjsdahafrasfhalkhgfjdkshgiadohgksldghf. I feel better. LOL! Add more soon hun. I'm lovin' it! -Ducky
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Post by blondechica2006 on Jun 13, 2005 23:36:04 GMT -5
PLZ POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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casurfurgirl
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Post by casurfurgirl on Jun 14, 2005 1:31:23 GMT -5
"You look marvellouse!!!" squealled Camiell as Ryan did a little spin to show off her ensamble for the big day. "What a hottie," she added as Ryan pretended to pose for the camera. "I can't believe it though, Connie Wilson!!! This is sooo cool. And to think that he was discovered in our city!!! But I have to admit, if it weren't for his good looks, I don't know how good his career would be considering he'd have to rely on acting." "I hear ya there sista!!!" shouted Camiell. The two teen burst into a fit of laughter. It was true, after all, that if it weren't for his modeling potential, Wilson would go nowhere. Camiell was the first one to break the happy mood by inching into a more serious conversation. "H-how's your stomach feeling today? It was bothering you a little last night when you called me." Ryan looked down at her shoes as if they were interesting. "Fine," she stated. Her sentences were becoming short. She still hadn't told Camiell about what the doctor had said, and she didn't plan to anytime soon. None of this was worth worrying her best friend over. Although, Camiell would disagree. "Well, on a happier note, he is going to be here any minute to pick you up!" That was what Ryan loved about her friend....she knew how to turn any depressiong situation into a glowy happy one. The doorbell sounded. "I must be psychic!" cheered Camiell as she put she put her hand into a fist and pulled her elbow past her side saying cha-ching! Ryan rolled her eyes. She took one last quick glance in the mirror at what she was wearing. Her denim jeans, cute baby-blue tank top that flowed a bit, and blue high heels were a good match. She gave Camiell one last hug and Camiell whispered good luck sweetie in her ear. "Hey, sorry," said Ryan as she opened the door to greet the young model. When she was able to get a first full look at him, she was impressed. He was a cutie alright. He winked at her and said, "Ryan Camo, right?" She was lost for words, all she could do was nod. "Wow," he comtinued in a suav voice, "I had no idea I would be picking up such a lovely lady today! Well are you ready?" He offered his arm and she accepted it. "Most definatly. So where are we off to?" Camiell had never ridden in a limo before, let alone gona on a date with anyone of his sort. "Where ever you want." Connie helped her into the limo and they pulled out of the nieghborhood. By about noon, the two were well aquainted and toughroughly enjoing eachothers company. They had eaten brunch at a nice little cafe called Minnies and were on their way to downtown L.A. to do a little shopping. Connie was taking her shopping even though she said she would fell guilty spending his money. But he had no problem buying anything for her and insted that they go and get something extra special for her. "Wow," whispered Ryan in awe as they stepped into Cloud Nine...a place that carried all high brand names. "This place is remarkable!!" "Well, pick something out and try it on!!!" encouraged Connie. "Are you sure? I feel so horrible spending your money!!" "No worries! Today is for fun and no second thoughts!!" Ryan found a hot little red dress and walked over to the lavish dressing rooms to try it on. Connie waited outside for her. "Ta Da!!" Ryan came out of her stall and did a little twirl for her date. "You like?" "Hell ya!" he said with an amazed expression on his face. "What about you?" "I like it," she simply stated. "Well, you change bak into your clothes and i am going to go over to the clerk and pay for it while you do." "Alright, and thank you sooo sooo much! I don't know how i am ever going to repay you!!!" Connie got a sly grin on his face. "I'll think of soemthing," he said. "Ah-huh, I'm sure you will," Ryan laughe das he walked over to the register. She got a weird feeling all of a sudden, like some one was watching her. Ryan turned around to see a sandy-blnd haired boy with blue-green eyes gazing at her in her little red dress. HE was about 5' 11'' and had a nice build. She wishe dshe was wearing her high heels at the moment so that she would look taller because compared to him she was quite small. A good nine inches shorter. When the boy noticed she was looking at him, he quickly turned away and pretened to be interested in something else. Ryan changed back into her original clothes and put on her heals. 'Maybe I will look a little taller to him now,' she thought as she carefully opened the dressing room door. Connie was still in line and he motioned for her to keep looking through the store, and to her pleasure, she did. Seeing that the gorgeouse boy was not to far from the hand bags, she walked over to them and casually looked them over, stealing a little glance at him every once and a while. She was sure of it now, she new who this boy was. After giving Ryan a few of what he thought were non-chalant looks, the boy gathered up enough courage to walk over to where she was which was now by the shoes. He didn't realize that she had purposly gravitating towards him the whole time hoping he would notice her. "Um, I hope I'm not being too forward, but, I couldn't help noticing you, and I just wanted to say hi." HIs voice was slightly quavery, but Ryan didn't mind. It showed that he was real. "Oh, you're not being to forward," she said, trying to seem as calm as she could. Inside she felt like she was trying to catch butterflies in a net with a hole in it. "Oh, well then in that case, I'm-" Ryan cut him off in the middle of his sentence. "There's no need to introduce yourself," she smiled at his baffled look. "I know who you are. Nice to meet you Jeremy Sumpter," she spoke as she extended her armm to shake his hand." "NIce to meet you too,....,"he looked at her waiting for her to announce her name, but the chance for her to say it was swept right form under both of their feet when Connie came over with a bag in hand and said, "So, are we ready to go?" "Yeah," sighed Ryan. She knew better than to be rude and continue hitting on other guys on her date with Connie. She felt bad that she had donr it in the first place, and she could tell connie was getting a little jealouse. As they walke dout of the revolving doors, Ryan gave Jeremy one last long, hopeful glance and saw him mouth, I hope to see you again.......
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Post by hannahk on Jun 14, 2005 9:35:21 GMT -5
OMG!!! THAT WAS SOOO GREAT!!!!! im way pumped for more!
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Post by blondechica2006 on Jun 14, 2005 10:50:06 GMT -5
PLZ POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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