THE UNBELIEVABLE

[dreamgirlann]

Ok,I decided to start a new story,because I just love to write!..So,I hope its gonna be any good!..OH and when you see a mark like this:*,by a letter it means the things the re thinking..so,hope you like it!

Title:The Unbelievable

Main characters:

Riley(16)-autumn brown hair and brown eyes.A rebel,with a lot of self confidence.Very stubborn and a good leader,although shes more the loner type.A.K.A FIRE.

Josh(16)a.k.a Jeremy(played by Jeremy of course)-Of course blond,messy hair and beautiful,ocean blue eyes.The class hero and sports tipe-doh,hes popular.Very,almost to proud ,with a good sense of humor.He also has a very good heart.A.K.A. EARTH.

Charlotte(16)-beautiful long black hair and dark eyes.A shy ,quiet and calm loner.But she likes to change her mude very quick.Her biggest problem is: she lets others walk all over her.A.K.A. WATER.

Blake(16)-Short brown hair and green eyes.Poor guy,he tries to fit in,but is always the clown of the entire school.But that doesnt bring him down,hes also caring and helpful.A.K.A. AIR.

OTHERS:
-Mr.Xankes
-Emily
-Leon
-Mary
-Mrs.Morgan
+ the others appearing in the story.

CHAPTER 1

*8 years before*
The little 8 years old Riley Morgan is a happy,cheerful girl.She likes the summer,where she can spend the time at the beach of A.L. with her parents.She just loves the beach and the warming sun.And of course she loves her parents,who take good care of their daughter,with all the love they can.
One evening in a cold November night Riley and Her parents go driving home,from a visit at her grandmother.Its a cold night and its raining heavily.Her father is driving,while her mother is playing with the little Riley,who is sitting at the back,with her favorite teddy bear in her hands.
R.M: The little *Icy* spider goes up the stony wall.....
R: Then comes the rain and washes the spider down....
Her mother is singing with her,while they re driving down a dark road.
R.M: then comes the sun and...
But as she wants to finish the sentence,her father looses control of their car on the road and Riley looks up seeing just two flashing lights coming closer towards them.She hears a horrible noise and Everything disappears,except those lights and her mothers voice when she hears her scream: Riley!Then all of a sudden it all goes black....With the car accident that night Riley was the only one who survived it,lying two weeks in a coma and she lost her best friends that night.Soon after that she came to live with her grandmother....

As Riley comes into the house,her grandmother puts her hands on her shoulders and looks at her,smiling a little.
M.M: Welcome home Riley...
Riley just looks at her with big eyes,that spell the words confused and lost.Her grandmother brings her up the stairs and opens a door right before her.She moves and lets her step in and look around.Its a room filled with a lot of toys and Barbie dolls,just a real girls room,with pink curtains and a big bed.Riley keeps looking around,surprised but not really happy.
M.M: This is your room....Well you just make yourself at home ok...
Her grandmother smiles at the big sad eyes of Rileys and leaves.Riley slowly steps to her new bed and sits down on it.After her parents death she didnt really cry and she wanted it to stay that way.With the lost of her parents she developed in a strong person,hard to brake.From then she promised herself she ll never get attached to an other person so much neither her grandmother,or someone else,so she woudnt get hurt in the first place,when she might lose them sooner or later...

[dreamgirlann]

CHAPTER 2

*Today*
With 8 years that passed Riley turned into a troubled teenager.She cut of her long brown hair from then,so today she has short to the neck long hair.He clothes are mostly wide skater pants and T-shirts,with plain sneakers.Her room is a real hip-hop studio,not a pink room for girls anymore.Shes changed.....

One morning Riley wakes up and hears the alarm clock go off;Ding,ding,ding,ding!!!!!She opens her eyes and reaches for it.
R: Oh shut up!(sleepy)
She stands up and looks around sleepy,before she gets changed.When shes dressed she goes and turns on the music,her favorite song from B2K:"take it to the floor" and starts to sing along.On the wall she has her favorite poster of her favorite movie "you got served".As she listens to the song she tries to escape the reality when...
M.M: Riley!Breakfast!
Riley breathes out and turns the music off.
R: Coming!
She takes her school bag and runs down the stairs,where she passes the kitchen table and grabs two shiny red apples and puts them into her school bag.
M.M: Riley,you have to eat something!
R: Thats ok,Im not hungry...And I ll miss the bus!
She runs to the door and opens them.
M.M: Ok,Honey...
R: Bye!
She gets out and closes the door after her.She stops and thinks about her grandmother and how much trouble she makes her,although she wants the best for her.But as soon as she sees the big,yellow bus infront her house is about to leave,she jumps up and starts to run.
R: Hey!....Not again!
Riley starts to run by the driving bus and starts to knock hard on it.
R: Hey!Come on!
The bus finally stops and Riley gets to the door.She looks at the driver,very angry and annoyed,out of breath.
T.D: Come on,Get on the bus!
Riley gets on,as the door closes after her and the bus drives farther.Riley starts her way to the back of the bus where her friends Emily and Leon are,waving at her.Well Riley doesnt have much friends,but two or three wont be that wrong Riley thought.So,she makes her way,when she hits into a blond headed boy,with blue eyes and a football in his hands.
R: Hey!
He looks at her and smiles.
J: Well miss Riley Morgan..Late again I see!
R*: Ass!Cant he leave me alone for just once!
R: Sir Josh Woodrow...A big mouth again I see!(smiles fake at him)
He just laughs a little and Riley goes on,when she hits into a black headed girl.
R: hey watch it,Charlotte!
C: Oh,Sorry!My fault!
Riley looks at her.
R*:Charlotte..Poor girl,she really should stand up for herself...
But she doesnt say anything.As she goes on a boy with brown hair is pushed into her,laughing and falls down on the floor.The others are laughing at him and he even thinks its funny.
R: Oh come on!!Ok stand up!
Riley grabs his arm and pulls him up.
B: Thanks,Riley!
R: Come on Blake open your eyes!
B: What?
R: Whatever!
She pushes him back on his seat again and finally comes to the end of the bus and sits down,by her friends and breathes out.
E: What took you so long(laughs)?
R: Everything!
L: So,...How are you?
R: Horrible!..An other day of school,an other day in hell!
E: Well thats fine with me!
Riley smiles and leans back,as the bus drives farther and takes them to the doors of hell-School.

So?..What do you think?

[caligirl]

its good i like it keep going

[dancergrl08]

yeah, it is good, i really like it! add more soon!!!

[hannahk]

this story sounds cool. keep it up

[dreamgirlann]

Tnx!Glad you like it!Sorry I havent posted so long,I was in Croatia for two weeks!Hope you like the next chapter!See ya!

CHAPTER 3

The cafeteria.At lunch Riley,Emily and Leon are as always,sitting together at a table eating,but Riley seems busy,looking at the table of the popular,where Josh and the other football players are sitting,with their girlfriends and Mary,Mary Watt-the grand leader,Joshes girlfriend is sitting on his lap and kissing him passionately like always.It seems like they re having fun.Riley keeps looking at them,when Emily and Leon are staring at her.Emily leans to Leon and whispers to him.
E: I bet 10 dollars that she ll say it again!
Leon smiles and Riley turns around looking at them.
E: What?
R: That dumb ass from Josh and his preppy girlfriend Mary!..I mean they re unbelievable!Cant they get a room?(takes a bite of her green apple)
E: see!Told you!
R: What?
L: Nothing!
R: Come on,guys!Tell me!
E: No!
R: Guys!
L: You talk a lot about Josh,for the fact that you "hate"him!
R: And your point is?
E: do you like him or what?
R: (angry)What?...NO!NEVER!
E: Sure?(smiles,almost laughing)
R: I cant believe you two!
But they still keep looking at her,laughing a little.
R: Ok!You two are so childish!
L: Like you arent?
R: Whatever!Im gonna get a soda!
Shes furious and stands up like that,but before Emily and Leon can say anything,she hits into Josh and his plate standing behind her and the half-full glass of milk spills on her shirt,all over her shirt,making her soaked wet.Its cold and she just keeps standing there with wide opened mouth and closed eyes,wanting to scream,but she doesnt.Emily and Leon are just shocked,waiting for her reaction and Josh seems cool about it.She opens her eyes and looks at him.
J: Sorry!(he says calmy)
R: Sorry?(furious)Sorry?How is sorry gonna help me!Its cold and Im wet!
J: Then change!
R: Oh,do you think I have like another shirt in my locker to change or what?
J: I do!
R:Well I dont!
J:Not my problem!
R: Not your problem?(loud)
J: No!You hit into me,not the opposite!(get a little angry)Why are you attacking me like that?
P.P:Whats the problem here?
The schools principal comes to them,with crossed arms.
J: An accident!(angrily)
R: A sabotage!(more angrily)
J: A stupid little girl!
R: A clumsy dead boy!
J: Wrong!
R: Right!
P.P: Ok,stop it!..Do you have something to change?
R: No!Does it look like I do?
P.P: Hey!No need to talk back like that!
R: Sorry..
P.P: Ok,Josh!I know you have something to change,since your a football player and you always need something to change!Am I right?
J: Yes,but-
P.P: Then thats it!Give her something to change!
Josh & Riley: But-
P.P: Go!The class starts in about..(looks on her watch)10 minutes if Im right..And You re not allowed to be late!
They just look at eachother.
P.P: Go on!
Josh and Riley looking at eachother angry slowly walk out of the cafeteria together,to get her changed.Not gladly,thats for sure.
A*:Great!Just my luck!

[hannahk]

thats good! keep it up

[RoxySurferJS]

Great...keep it up...the story sounds rad...I like it alot

Roxy

[smile]

Cool.
P.s: pri kaj na Msn,ti morm nekaj zvzi z jer poveat, kaj rabiš da dobiš ogovor njegov nazaj!

[dreamgirlann]

Tnx!Im very happy that you like the story so far!And Tnx for all your comments!

CHAPTER 4

Josh goes down the hallway furious,to his own locker and Riley is right after him -and trust me,if looks could kill Josh would be dead by now-.
R:Thanks a lot Josh!(sarcastic)
J: No problem!(angrily)
Josh opens his locker and takes out his other T-shirt-which has to be his Football uniform- and pushes it into Rileys hands.
J: Here you go!
He closes the locker,when Riley keeps staring at him,confused.
J: What?
R: You must be kidding me,Woodrow!Your football uniform?
J: Am,yeah.Whats the problem?
R: Well besides the fact that I dislike,no wait hate football and that the colors green and yellow dont suit me-nothing!
J: Well then everythings fine!Now put it on!My other T- shirt is dirty,ok?
R: (rolls with her eyes)Fine!!!..Now I have to walk around with this T-shirt,looking like its a statement!
J: Dont worry,It wont kill you!
R: Well,lets just hope so!
Riley goes down to the girls bathroom and wants to open the door,but it wont.
R: What?(confused)
She tries again and again.
R: Why the hell wont this door open?
As somebody coughs behind her,she turns around seeing Josh.
J: Maybe because there is a piece of paper on the door explaining :"Out of order"!(points on the door)
R:Thanks,Josh!Im such an idiot that wouldnt figure it out myself you know!(sarcastic)
J: No problem,Im always here to help!(smiles fake)
R: And now what?(turn to the door)I dont have the time to go to the other end of the hallway or anyway,because Im gonna miss class and get detention as the principal said!(breathes out)Man,I hate that woman!
Josh just keeps looking at her,until she turns to him.
R: Dont stand there!Help me or you ll too get detention!
Josh thinks for a second and Riley keeps staring at him.
R: So?
J: Come on!(puts his arm around her shoulders)
R: What?
J: Just come on!
He takes her to his locker,opens it again and takes out his jacket.He holds it up before her and looks away.
J: Come on,hurry!
R: You re not serious!Im not gonna dress infront of you,or undress in this case!
J: Got a better idea,Miss Morgan?
Riley thinks about it for a while and then turns around.
R: But dont even try to look or I ll brake every bone in your body!
J: Dont worry!
But as Riley takes of her half wet shirt,dropping it on the floor and putting on the other,Josh cant help himself and looks quickly, as she doesnt notice.And while looking he sees her perfect shapes,her perfect body-"She could easy be a cheerleader!"He thinks- and wonders why the hell she hides it under those wide T-shirts she always wears.Then he smiles at himself,just when Riley turns around and looks at him,when she picks up her T-shirt.
R: What is it now?
J: Nothing!(he says smiling)We better get back to class before we get detention!
Josh puts his jacket back into his locker and they both head to the classroom. Josh keeps smiling the whole way back,as Riley keeps looking at him a little confused.

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Simple plan,Grow up:

I d like to stay at a place
and hours at the phone.
Hanging out with all my friends
and never being at home.
Im impolite
and havent thought of everyone.
Im immature,
but I will stay like this forever.
Until the day I die.
I promise I wont change.
So you better give up.
I dont wanna be told to grow up.
And I dont wanna change,
I just wanna have fun.
I dont wanna be told to grow up.
And I dont wanna change,
So you better give up.
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[dancergrl08]

This story is awesome hun!!! i am lovin' it! you gotta add more soon!

Woah! and i just noticed your signature quote thingy (lol) is from 'Moulin Rouge'!!! haha, i love the music in that movie, me and some of the counselors would bust out singing the 'elephant love melody' song when we got bored; i don't have it, so i downloaded a ton movie clips with the songs. hehe, gotta love that movie (or at least the music)

[RoxySurferJS]

Post more soon...I'm liking it alot!
Roxy

[dreamgirlann]

Tnx!Glad you like it!

CHAPTER 5

S.T: Josh!Riley!...(looks at them)You re late!
Josh and Riley look at their teacher,a little embarrassed as they step into the classroom.
J: Sorry..
R: It was-
S.T: I know,I know...The principal told me!But sorry will not do...(comes to them and gives Josh a pair of keys)Take the keys and go bring me my papers from the 3b...The second row on the right..You ll find it!
R:But..
S.T: Go on!

Josh and Riley find themselves walking down the hallway.Together.Now who would of thought that.
R:Great!
J: Hey,look at it this way...We dont need to be in class!
R: Waaw!Im soooo thrilled!(smiles fake)
J: You know,Morgan...You re starting to be a real pain in my ass!
R: Thanks!..Thats what Im depending on!
As they reach the door,Josh opens it and laughs at Rileys statement.
J: After you,Lady Riley!
R: For the record-Im no lady!
She smiles and goes in.
J: You dont say!
As they step in they start to look around-The 3b class is for school staff only.Here are school prizes,gifts and belongings-very interested.
J: Wow!Cool!
R: yeah,right.
J: Would you look at that!..
Josh steps to the glass closet on his left and opens it.
R: (shocked)What are you doing?
J: Calm down..
Josh takes out a glass ball-very fragile-that was given to the school in 1990 as a gift and starts to look at it.
R: Again-What are you doing?!
L: Im just looking at it.
R: You look with your eyes,not with your hands.
L: Chill!Its not like Im gonna brake it!...(smiles and looks at her)Hey!Catch!
R: No!(panicked)
L: I was just kidding!(laughs)
Riley looks at him,angrily,steps to him and takes away the ball.
R: Give it!....(breathes out)And Grow up,Woodrow!!
J:Thanks,but I like being 16!
R: You re more 6 then 16!
She takes it and puts it on the edge of the table.
R: (breathes out)Lets just get the papers!Ok?
J: Fine.
She goes on her knees and opens a drawer,looks through some stuff,while Josh steps behind her and finds the papers.
R: Ok,thats it!
J: Then lets go already...
R:yeah,yeah.
J: You know..The quicker the better!
Riley stands up,and as she turns around,Josh scares her and she jumps back,hitting into the table.
R: (breathes out and put her hand on her chest)Are you crazy?You scared me to death!
Josh laughs,but both will stop laughing.The glass ball,starts to roll and both look at it,but to late.The ball rolls from the table and bam!It hits the floor,the glass-shattered,it falls to a thousand pieces.Josh and Riley keep looking at it for a while,until...
J: (Like in shock)O my...
R: (screams)God!!!!
Riley goes on her knees and starts to pick together the pieces.
R: O my god!O my god!
J: (goes also on his knees to her,looking at her,a little scared)Ok,calm down!
R: Calm down?Calm down?!!!(get loud)I ll show you how I calm down!!!
J: Hey,Its not like its all my fault!
R: Who took it out and started to play with it?
J: And who put it on the table?
they keep looking at eachother a little angry,but they forget about that and start to think what they re gonna do.
J: O crap!This did not just happen!
R: OK,..Lets just pick up the glass...... and throw it away....and be quiet about it!
J: Are you mad?
R: Ok,If you would like to get in trouble..(shows him the pieces of glass)Please,be my guest!
J: OK!...But this is between us!
R: Yeah,dont worry!
They start to picks together the pieces of glass-whispering something to eachother- as they suddenly see a big,dark shadow appear above their heads.They both stop ,look at eachother-very slowly- and then they raise their heads,spotting the angry biologist teacher standing there-Thats when they freeze.
B.T: (angrily,with crossed arms)Well,well...
A: Oh,sh*t!

[dreamgirlann]

CHAPTER 6

An hour later.In the hallway is a big mess,the news from the broken ball has already made turns around the students.Charlotte is standing before her locker,looking through her stuff,when Danny and another one of his c^cky friends come along,starting to make fun and take advantage of her.Danny comes and leans on the locker,right by and smiles at her as she looks at him.
D: Hey there Charlotte!(looks down at her)Nice!
C: (a little bit unsure)Danny!
The scene is watching Blake,not far from them.He knows the guys good and doesnt feel good seeing what he does.
D:Busy this afternoon?
C:Actually-Yes!
D: Oh,come on...
C: NO,thank you.
D: Hey baby...
B: Is there a problem?
As the two guys turn around,they just laugh seeing Blake.
D.F: No,everythings fine.
D: (laughs)yeah(hits Blake a little in the arm)see you,Blakey boy!
Blake looks after the guys as they disappear laughing and turns to Charlotte.
B: You ok?
C: Yeah.....Thanks,Blake.
Blake just keeps looking and nodes.

P.P: (screams so loud that window are braking-jk)I cant believe this!!!!!!!
J: We re sorry!...Really sorry!
R:It was an accident.We swear...
The principal keeps looking at the two siting in the chairs,trying to explain everything.
P.P: An accident?How??!!!!!!It was supposed to be locked up in the closet!
R: (looks at Josh just like she would be pointing fingers)Yeah,"supposed"!!
J: Oh,dont blame me!
R: You took it out!
J And you put it on the table!
P.P: Enough!(loudly)
They both stop and look at her.
P.P: You re both guilty!And you will both take the punishment for that!
R: Oh,just awesome!(sarcastic)
J: What?
The principal thinks about it and then sits down at her desk.
P.P: Detention!...Report after school in the cafeteria!
J: The cafeteria?
R: What are we going to do there?
P.P: (laughs-a little mean though)Oh,you ll see!
Riley closes her eyes,leans forward on her knees and covers her face,with her hands.
R: (whispers)Thanks a lot!
J: (leans back,disappointed,says with a low and quiet voice)No problem.

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Simple Plan,Shut up:

There you go!
You re always so right!
Its all a big show!
Its all about you!
You think you know,
What everyone needs,
you always take time to criticis me!
It seems like everyday,
I make mistakes,
I just cant get it right!
Its like Im the one,
you love to hate,
but not today!
So,shut up!
Shut up!
Shut up!
Go on and hear me!
Get out!
Get out!
Get out!
Get out of my way!
Step up!
Step up!
Step up!
You ll never stop me!
Nothing you say today is gonna bring me down!
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[thimbles4JerBear]

Hey post more...I'm really liking this