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Post by Arwen07 on Nov 9, 2005 19:59:00 GMT -5
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMOMG!!!! That was GREAT!!!! So is jeremy dead?!! Like it kinda sounds like he would be. But can u die from gettin stabed in the stomach? OMG! I can't believe it! All this time i thought spidey was a GUY!!! Not a gurl!!! lol! I"m such a blonde. lol! OMG! That was sooo good! Are you gonna do a sequel for it? OMG! I'm still freakin out over the end! Like denise had a brain tumor!!!! That is explainable. Like i can't believe i didn't think of that. lol! I cna't remember but didn't earlier in the story...i think this might be that story...that jeremy was talkin on the phone or something to some julia? I can't remember. It's either this story or another story that i'm reading. I can't remember. lol! I know i'm a super blonde! lol! But it was awesome gurl! I can't believe it's over! lol! I hope you write a sequel...i think a sequel could work. lol!
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Post by blondechica2006 on Nov 9, 2005 22:25:13 GMT -5
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! FANTASTIC!!! STUPENDERIFIC!!!!
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Post by jeremysgrin on Nov 11, 2005 18:24:56 GMT -5
Thanks blondechica2006. That really made my day. Thanks Arwen07. I totally appreciate your comments. Okay, everyone here is the scoop. Yes, unfortunately Jeremy died. Uh, well I assumed you could die from being stabbed in the stomach. I guess if he bled to death before the ambulance got there. You thought Spidey was a guy the whole time? That's what you were supposed to think. That was the "twist" at the end. EVIL LAUGH That and the fact that Spidey was Denise's sister too. Back in July when I got the idea to write this story, Julia (Jsumptergrl) (she posts here) asked me to put her in my story...which I did. The real Julia loves Spiderman and skateboarding which I used in the story. These are two things that both a guy or a girl could like and I knew those things could "trick" the reader into thinking that Spidey was a guy. The physical description of Spidey and her personality traits (at least there at the end when she got all sarcastic) was just like the "real" Julia. When she says, "Oh the cleverness of me"...of course that was a quote from "Peter Pan". It also fit as a line there PLUS it was sorta a "shout out" or an "inside joke" because the real Jeremy was in that movie. It was really difficult to write the character of Spidey because I could never use pronouns when referring to her. So it was constantly Spidey this and Spidey that. Denise and Spidey both had the same parents and lived in the same house. But I wrote it to be confusing because sometimes I would say, "Spidey's parents" or "Denise's parents" to make you think there were two sets of parents but there wasn't. The only person Jeremy talked to in this story on the phone was Denise and Barbara, you must be thinking of another one. Yes, I'm really thinking about doing a sequel. Even though it wouldn't have Jeremy in it, there will be some "Jeremy-ness" because of a long-lost twin brother!!!!!
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Post by ChicagoChick on Nov 12, 2005 21:44:55 GMT -5
soooo freakin' AWESOME!!! oh i absolutely LOVED this story, it was so good and detailed and...did i say good? because it was, keep writing. keep writing. ;D kudos insert applause *here* and *here*
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Post by jeremysgrin on Nov 13, 2005 16:00:28 GMT -5
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH, ChicagoChick!!!! Your comments totally made me smile. You guys are the greatest for caring about and reading my story. *sniff* Thank you.
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Post by Arwen07 on Nov 13, 2005 17:05:40 GMT -5
OMG! It was sooo awesome! OMG! I never guessed that denise and julia were sisters. It was really good! I absolutly LOVED it!
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Post by jeremysgrin on Dec 13, 2005 12:11:54 GMT -5
Thank you, Arwen07 about what you just said. I just wanted to check in and let everyone know what was going on with my writing. I do have a rough draft of the sequel to this story written up. It's typed and needs a LOT of work on it. The story will be called "Jilted 2: Spidey's revenge". So, everyone that is interested, please encourage me so I won't get lazy. I have no idea if this story will be any good or even what will happen beyond the first chapter....but I just thought I would let everyone know.
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Post by Arwen07 on Dec 13, 2005 16:21:30 GMT -5
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! A sequel!!! I love sequels!!! lol! It sounds kool..spidey returns!!! lol! I can't wait 2 read it!
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Post by jeremysgrin on Dec 13, 2005 19:03:40 GMT -5
AWWW, thanks Arwen07 for your enthusiasm. I'm gonna force myself to work on my story a little each day.
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