My Jeremy poem

jeremysgrin
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My Jeremy poem Aug 20, 2005 16:38:20 GMT -5

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Post by jeremysgrin on Aug 20, 2005 16:38:20 GMT -5

Hey everyone.

Here is my Jeremy poem that I wrote several months back. Maybe this will tide everyone over until I get chapter 4 written.

Roxy and Julia have already seen this one though.

*Ode to Jeremy*

You are my innocent child bride
body untainted by whoring.
Your value worth more than rubies
and gold.
You have hopped into my heart with
your grasshopper legs.
Your voice so beguiling and soft.
I'll be your Wendy, just
whisper my name.
Your eyelashes so long they blow hurricanes
when you blink.
Your hair as curly as a sheep.
I must pet it.
Your face as innocently sweet as an angel's
Please don't lose that halo.
So tall and strong.
Protect me, you're my soldier of love.
Your eyes as blue as sea water.
I splash myself in them.
Your impish grin
so deceptive with its cute crooked teeth.
It is a mask for the smoldering intensity you are capable of.
Let the flames burn.

You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet.
There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you.
Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild
butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

caligirl God Posts: 701	My Jeremy poem Aug 20, 2005 16:44:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by caligirl on Aug 20, 2005 16:44:35 GMT -5 awwww that was sooo good....i love it ;D

jeremysgrin God Sabrina is my honorary little sis. :) Posts: 2,820	My Jeremy poem Aug 20, 2005 17:38:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jeremysgrin on Aug 20, 2005 17:38:53 GMT -5 Thank you, caligirl! I never write poetry but Jeremy inspired me on that day and I felt compelled to write it.
	You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet. There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you. Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

RoxySurferJS Senior Member To HELL with you and all your friends Posts: 369	My Jeremy poem Aug 21, 2005 0:46:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by RoxySurferJS on Aug 21, 2005 0:46:56 GMT -5 Aww I remember that! I felt honored to have been one of the first to read it! lol! I love that poem...it got it right...and it was great!
	Dont ask me why I stayed Dont ask me why I love you Dont ask me why I chose you Dont ask me why I want to be with you Dont ask me why I will not look at you in the face Dont ask..just dont ask me it hurts to look at you, it hurts to let you go, it hurts to want to be with you& know that i cant, it hurts to love you&know you dont, it hurts...that's all you need to know, it hurts2 LET you GO!!

jsumptersgrl God --♥ Posts: 2,272	My Jeremy poem Aug 21, 2005 4:55:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jsumptersgrl on Aug 21, 2005 4:55:09 GMT -5 How long did it take you to make that one, Ronnie?
	so there goes my life, passing by with every exit sign. and it's been so long, Sometimes I wonder how I will stay strong. no sleep tonight. I'll keep on driving these dark highway lines.. and as the moon fades, One more night gone, only 20 more days. but I will see you again, I will see you again, a long time from now.

jeremysgrin God Sabrina is my honorary little sis. :) Posts: 2,820	My Jeremy poem Aug 21, 2005 15:24:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jeremysgrin on Aug 21, 2005 15:24:58 GMT -5 I did in a day. Maybe a couple hours? I can't remember.
	You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet. There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you. Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

jeremysgrin God Sabrina is my honorary little sis. :) Posts: 2,820	My Jeremy poem Aug 21, 2005 19:27:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jeremysgrin on Aug 21, 2005 19:27:40 GMT -5 AWWWWW Thank you, Roxy!!!
	You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet. There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you. Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

jsumptersgrl God --♥ Posts: 2,272	My Jeremy poem Aug 22, 2005 1:56:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jsumptersgrl on Aug 22, 2005 1:56:05 GMT -5 Hehe. Well I love it. I thought it was very creative.
	so there goes my life, passing by with every exit sign. and it's been so long, Sometimes I wonder how I will stay strong. no sleep tonight. I'll keep on driving these dark highway lines.. and as the moon fades, One more night gone, only 20 more days. but I will see you again, I will see you again, a long time from now.

RoxySurferJS Senior Member To HELL with you and all your friends Posts: 369	My Jeremy poem Aug 22, 2005 12:20:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by RoxySurferJS on Aug 22, 2005 12:20:54 GMT -5 Yes it was very creative! And put him very much good detail...
	Dont ask me why I stayed Dont ask me why I love you Dont ask me why I chose you Dont ask me why I want to be with you Dont ask me why I will not look at you in the face Dont ask..just dont ask me it hurts to look at you, it hurts to let you go, it hurts to want to be with you& know that i cant, it hurts to love you&know you dont, it hurts...that's all you need to know, it hurts2 LET you GO!!

jeremysgrin God Sabrina is my honorary little sis. :) Posts: 2,820	My Jeremy poem Aug 22, 2005 17:39:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jeremysgrin on Aug 22, 2005 17:39:30 GMT -5 AWWW Thank you all.
	You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet. There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you. Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

jsumptersgrl God --♥ Posts: 2,272	My Jeremy poem Sept 2, 2005 15:26:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jsumptersgrl on Sept 2, 2005 15:26:28 GMT -5 You should totally consider making another Jeremy poem. I love reading whatever you write because you can tell it comes straight from your heart. Even the whole Denise thing, in Jilted.. Totally from the heart. LOL
	so there goes my life, passing by with every exit sign. and it's been so long, Sometimes I wonder how I will stay strong. no sleep tonight. I'll keep on driving these dark highway lines.. and as the moon fades, One more night gone, only 20 more days. but I will see you again, I will see you again, a long time from now.

jeremysgrin
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Sabrina is my honorary little sis. :)

Posts: 2,820

My Jeremy poem Sept 2, 2005 17:54:35 GMT -5

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Post by jeremysgrin on Sept 2, 2005 17:54:35 GMT -5

*LOL* AWWW, thank you Julia!! I just can't write poems...I'm surprised I was even able to write that one! Wow! When you read chapter 5, I hope you don't think that the way Denise acts comes from my heart but.........maybe it does.

You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet.
There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you.
Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild
butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

jsumptersgrl God --♥ Posts: 2,272	My Jeremy poem Sept 2, 2005 20:58:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jsumptersgrl on Sept 2, 2005 20:58:08 GMT -5 OoOoOoh! I promise I won't think anything bad. Hehe
	so there goes my life, passing by with every exit sign. and it's been so long, Sometimes I wonder how I will stay strong. no sleep tonight. I'll keep on driving these dark highway lines.. and as the moon fades, One more night gone, only 20 more days. but I will see you again, I will see you again, a long time from now.

jeremysgrin God Sabrina is my honorary little sis. :) Posts: 2,820	My Jeremy poem Sept 2, 2005 22:58:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jeremysgrin on Sept 2, 2005 22:58:45 GMT -5 AWWW, Okay.
	You are an obsession. I cannot sleep. I am a posession. Unopened at your feet. There is no balance. No equality. Be still. I will not accept defeat. I will have you. Yes I will have you. I will find a way and I will have you. Like a butterfly. A wild butterfly. I will collect you and capture you....

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Post by jsumptersgrl on Aug 21, 2005 4:55:09 GMT -5

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Post by jeremysgrin on Sept 2, 2005 22:58:45 GMT -5