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A SONG
Oct 19, 2005 11:50:26 GMT -5
Post by juicy14 on Oct 19, 2005 11:50:26 GMT -5
okay, since I'm in a band, I write a lot of songs...I wrote that one last night and I'd like to know what you think...be honest please lol
"You should be with me" If I look around, you're always there outside, inside, no matter where I've just heard your voice, it's a beautiful sound I'd love to decide, but I've got no choice
Bridge: So tell me are you still with her? Come on baby, it's not fair I tell you she's not worth the pain you're waisting your time, it's just a shame
Chorus: 'Cause deep in my mind, I know that you're sure you could do better, better than her she really might be you're kind of chick but the way that she's smiling, it just makes me sick Tell me I'm wrong, then we will see but don't you think....you should be with me?
If I look around and see you with her these wounds are bleeding, that's for sure and I can't explain the way that I feel these thoughts on my mind, they drive me insane
Repeat Bridge
Repeat Chorus
You think I'm crazy for what I do but you really should know ...I can't live without you
Bridge
Chorus
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A SONG
Oct 19, 2005 14:26:23 GMT -5
Post by jeremysgrin on Oct 19, 2005 14:26:23 GMT -5
That's awesome, Sabrina!!! Totally amazing!! Have you ever written a song about Jeremy? Do you ever write songs in German? I wish I could write a song!
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A SONG
Oct 19, 2005 14:46:55 GMT -5
Post by hannahk on Oct 19, 2005 14:46:55 GMT -5
that song was awsome!!! i like it alot!! are u playing it with piano or electric guitar, or accoustic guitar, or electric accoustic guitar? if u are, you should give me the taps or notes!!! but that song is sweet
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A SONG
Oct 21, 2005 11:10:15 GMT -5
Post by juicy14 on Oct 21, 2005 11:10:15 GMT -5
lol thank you... yeah I've written a song about Jeremy once lol .....I play electric guitar, but my friend has to write a melody for the song first so I ain't got the notes yet, but I could show them to you as soon as I got them
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A SONG
Oct 21, 2005 16:26:11 GMT -5
Post by jeremysgrin on Oct 21, 2005 16:26:11 GMT -5
You've written a song about Jeremy??!! Will you post it here? What's it rated? *LOL*
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A SONG
Oct 21, 2005 19:40:47 GMT -5
Post by hannahk on Oct 21, 2005 19:40:47 GMT -5
lol thank you... yeah I've written a song about Jeremy once lol .....I play electric guitar, but my friend has to write a melody for the song first so I ain't got the notes yet, but I could show them to you as soon as I got them thats sooo sweet! im so excited, i cant wait!!
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A SONG
Oct 23, 2005 6:37:44 GMT -5
Post by juicy14 on Oct 23, 2005 6:37:44 GMT -5
lol yes Rhonda, I wrote a song about him once, but I won't post, it, it's really personal lol
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A SONG
Oct 23, 2005 11:30:33 GMT -5
Post by jeremysgrin on Oct 23, 2005 11:30:33 GMT -5
AWWWW Okay. I understand.
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A SONG
Oct 24, 2005 11:04:52 GMT -5
Post by juicy14 on Oct 24, 2005 11:04:52 GMT -5
lol thank you, you rock!!
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A SONG
Oct 24, 2005 17:43:26 GMT -5
Post by jeremysgrin on Oct 24, 2005 17:43:26 GMT -5
hehe You're welcome.
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