Something I wrote yesterday

[juicy14]

Gracefully she walks around
her head held up high, her smile as bright as the stars
but her lips are screaming without a sound
trying to save her soul she hides its scars
while her heart is bleeding
with every lie she's got to tell
keeping up the fake life she's leading
somewhere between heaven and hell
she's a convict, kept inside her own body
as she tries to escape the pain
with no expression on her face, her arms all bloody
bloody from the wounds she caused herself in shame....

[jeremysgrin]

Wow Sabrina...that's awesome! Very violent and sad imagery. Something tells me this poem is about you. Am I right?

[Arwen07]

Aww that's a good poem! It does sound very sad and dark. Like jeremysgrin said..is it bout u?

[juicy14]

I'm glad you guys like it.....I write a lot of poems, I've got this art book thing, where I express my feelings in with songs and poems and drawings...it's something like an outlet for me....
The poem is about me, yeah. I like to write things out of another perspective though....it helps me to get a clearer view of my situation...

[jeremysgrin]

I write a lot of poems, I've got this art book thing, where I express my feelings in with songs and poems and drawings...it's something like an outlet for me....

That's really sweet and good therapy too! I didn't know you could draw!

The poem is about me, yeah. I like to write things out of another perspective though....it helps me to get a clearer view of my situation...

It sounded so sad.